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Letter from the Board of Judges

by Cañete, Villagonzalo, Bedolido, Gayatin, Supremo

Atom Araullo’s "Letter From Tawi-Tawi” exemplifies how creative nonfiction can be flexible in capturing the lives of real people. Intersecting various genres and applying a range of devices from poetry, fiction, and reality, the work reconciles the truths in journalism and the narrative technique of fiction. With every scene and dialogue, the writer immerses himself in the lands of Tawi-Tawi and transports his own experience to his readers. Using Lee Gutkind’s 5Rs of creative nonfiction, we will examine the remarkable qualities and details of Araullo’s essay to prove why it deserves the 1st Prize for the Essay in the Carlos Palanca Memorial Literary Awards.

 

In the real-life aspect, the essay is able to capture the lived experiences of individuals in remote communities in Tawi-Tawi. The author immerses himself in the lives of individuals: from walking along the bustling Chinese port and riding the jam-packed lantsa to accompanying Teacher Sidang in her door-to-door teaching sessions with her students, allowing him to accurately narrate their realities. Araullo utilizes narratives and the situation of the Tawi-Tawi people, such as Cansida Arances, Teacher Sidang, Marsila, and Sali, by entwining with his experiences within the larger Philippine socio-political landscape. In his essay, he presents how disparities and inequalities are connected to other problems like low literacy rates, corruption, etc., which further marginalized individuals who are literally and figuratively the farthest away from the ‘center,’ which is Manila. Readers are not only able to see their struggles but also their aspirations and agency. Through interviews and observations, Araullo exhibits the voices and perspectives of the people he encounters, adding depth and authenticity to the narrative.

 

Instead of just simply describing the place and the people, Araullo demonstrates thorough research on the historical and socio-political context of Tawi-Tawi, providing background information on its cultural heritage, economic challenges, and political dynamics. This is evident in how he provides a brief history of Tawi-Tawi, the issues on vote buying, and the NGO initiatives to combat the lack of education in the community. He incorporates statistics and data, such as literacy rates and economic indicators, to support his analysis and enhance readers’ understanding of the region’s challenges. Araullo’s research adds credibility to his narrative and reinforces the urgency of addressing the issues faced by marginalized communities in Tawi-Tawi. While personal anecdotes give life to the core of the essay, Araullo gave importance to referencing historical injustices and political complexities which created a richer understanding of Tawi-tawi's present context. This then demonstrates Araullo’s commitment to supplementing the right information to make a well-informed picture of Tawi-Tawi’s situation.

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Atom is a skilled reader, evident in the diverse range of literature he explores to craft his exceptional essays. His prose is captivating, showcasing his mastery of language and exceptional storytelling abilities. Atom's engagement with various perspectives reflects his genuine interest in amplifying voices and exploring profound themes. His essays draw readers in from the start and hold their attention until the very end, much like the acclaimed authors he admires. He is perhaps inspired by George Orwell who is known for his clarity and precision in language in works like “1984” and “Animal Farm.” Or Ernest Hemmingway who is renowned for his straightforward prose. Either way, one thing we know for sure, his English language is very easy to follow.

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The essay opens with the descriptive detail of the Chinese port, which gives readers vivid imagery of the place. Araullo brings characters to life through dialogue and poignant anecdotes, highlighting the dedication, enthusiasm, and resilience of the people in the community. Aside from this, he taps into the reader’s emotional depth by using sensory details and descriptive language that creates a sense of immediacy and intimacy in his storytelling. With this, we will see that Araullo’s writing captivates the readers by utilizing powerful imagery that transitions smoothly between narratives which balances the personal stories and insightful commentary together. The use of multiple techniques, like descriptive language, dialogue, and even poetic touches, adds a fresh perspective to the struggle of marginalized communities, leaving a lasting impact on the reader.

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“Letter from Tawi-Tawi” stands out as a masterful work of creative nonfiction that combines rich accounts from people, nuanced analysis, engaging storytelling, and thought-provoking reflections to offer a compelling portrait of life in Tawi-Tawi. Its depth, authenticity, and impact make it a deserving recipient of the 1st Prize for the Essay in the Carlos Palanca Memorial Literary Awards.

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